Pitch feedback

The sub-genre is psychological thriller.

We will use the shots, for example, when Ryan is using his computer.

We will use the music to create suspense for the audience.

The house shows that the couple are financially stable and are living well. The alleyway shows the thriller side of the film where Amaris could attack Maya.

Amaris: stalker and madly in love with Ryan

Maya: Victim and Ryan's girlfriend

Ryan: Victim's boyfriend

Maya and Ryan are both entrepreneurs who have their own business of car dealerships. This will relate to the male side of audience because men like cars.

We could change the picnic into a morning walk considering the weather.

We will use the cleaning products when Amaris is cleaning. When Ryan is doing his work, he will use the books, laptop and his glasses.

The man that appears in the opening sequence is Charlie Lunan, playing Ryan Wilson.

Considering her bipolar disorder, she will try her best to take Maya down.

The characters will be portrayed as middle aged to fit our target audience of 18-25 year olds.

We could change our costume and prop ideas that have been said in the interview.

The plot could end on a cliffhanger leaving the audience wanting to know more.

There could be extras in the background when we go and shoot in public locations.

After looking into our pitch feedback we decided to change a few things that we had planned before, such as our costume ideas, plans between the two characters, like the picnic because of the season that we will be filming in etc in order to fit our sequence with our sub-genre.